I'm not too crazy about the color scheme, but this composition is .. very interesting! There's something bothering me, I see the letter A, and then I want to see the Q, but because the defghijklmnop~, although they're smaller than the Q, there's so many of them that it makes me see it as a whole.
Maybe you don't really need that many letters in the middle. But I reallllyyy like how you did the Q with the alphabets behind it. It's really nice.
farah is correct if you do go with the last one, make a better choice in the middle figure out how to not repeat the letters: maybe numbers and punct or caps vrs lowercase... something to think about later. -- andrea
I really like the composition and color scheme of this one, the dashed lines framing the content is a nice touch, and the diagram for the Q is helpful. I think you could have put even more information like that in there, and rather than just circling the parts of the letter, you could have some smaller text explaining it as well.
About the Q with the alphabet behind it, I think it would be interesting if the alphabet was shifted so that the smaller Q was inside the big one, or even take out the smaller Q altogether. That way, it would tie together nicely without the alphabet seeming more like a decoration.
I'm not too crazy about the color scheme, but this composition is .. very interesting!
ReplyDeleteThere's something bothering me, I see the letter A, and then I want to see the Q, but because the defghijklmnop~, although they're smaller than the Q, there's so many of them that it makes me see it as a whole.
Maybe you don't really need that many letters in the middle. But I reallllyyy like how you did the Q with the alphabets behind it. It's really nice.
farah is correct if you do go with the last one, make a better choice in the middle figure out how to not repeat the letters: maybe numbers and punct or caps vrs lowercase... something to think about later. -- andrea
ReplyDeleteI really like the composition and color scheme of this one, the dashed lines framing the content is a nice touch, and the diagram for the Q is helpful. I think you could have put even more information like that in there, and rather than just circling the parts of the letter, you could have some smaller text explaining it as well.
ReplyDeleteAbout the Q with the alphabet behind it, I think it would be interesting if the alphabet was shifted so that the smaller Q was inside the big one, or even take out the smaller Q altogether. That way, it would tie together nicely without the alphabet seeming more like a decoration.
Good work, though!